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ZZDave Menacing BBQ
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In a slow mo(tion) epiphany
I harpooned what had been rumbling away
inside for awhile.
My intense pretensions of a meaningful flight
from the suburbs of Many-napolis,
an exodus from the Midwest to the West Coast,
seemed now somehow nothin' but a flat orbit completing...
As personal, or even extra-personal as this,
even an eclipse.
I was no good at geometry,
finishin' up in neither major nor minor key,
with unspecific ragged rhyme, reason or point.
Tales of someone constantly trying to go over the edge
and never quite gettin' there.
This can be seen even in the tellin'.
Restless restive rebellious subversive power-packed prose,
sometimes spreads its own edgy wings approaching further flight...
But time and time again
pulls back to coherency
at critical checkpoints.
I should hope it would be attractive
to anyone with an appreciation
for the anarchic and exciting.
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Story Telling That
Makes A
Difference
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