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ZZDave Menacing BBQ
In a slow mo(tion) epiphany
I harpooned what had
been rumbling away
inside for awhile.
My intense
pretensions of a meaningful flight
from the suburbs of
Many-napolis,
an exodus from the
Midwest to the West Coast,
seemed now somehow
nothin' but a flat orbit completing...
As personal, or even
extra-personal as this,
even an eclipse.
I was no good at
geometry,
finishin' up in
neither major nor minor key,
with unspecific
ragged rhyme, reason or point.
Tales of someone
constantly trying to go over the edge
and never quite
gettin' there.
This can be seen even
in the tellin'.
Restless restive
rebellious subversive power-packed prose,
sometimes spreads its
own edgy wings approaching further flight...
But time and time
again
pulls back to
coherency
at critical
checkpoints.
I should hope it
would be attractive
to anyone with an
appreciation
for the anarchic and
exciting.
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Story Telling That
Makes A
Difference
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